The great thing about strips like these is I get to draw a bunch of poses and see where I`m improving and where I really need to work harder. Clearly the head-on shot (#4) needs a lot more work, as do my hands. The third shot I`m actually really happy with, as I thought it would turn out much worse. I had to push myself to draw these, which is always good, so I skimped a bit on the coloring.
Writing on this one was tough, too: I wanted to keep it moving, but I really wanted to rant as well. In the end, I cut the dialog down a lot. What the characters say is really important, but comics are a graphic medium, and if I want to read a novel I go pick up a novel. No sense in bogging down the reader once you convey your point.