Unfortunately, everything through the window is out of proportion: It should be pretty far away if that is actual size. Also, Mr. Fuzzybuns is out of proportion to the items on the desk (considering he’s a kitten). Oops. It conveyed what I wanted to convey in the space I had, so I did it. In retrospect, I probably should have designed around it in a different way, but it’s done now.
Making mistakes is how you learn. At the rate I make mistakes, I’m going to be the next oracle.
There should only be one more strip without words, unless I decide to go back to my earlier pacing and put two more in. I think I have it cut down to one strip, though, without losing important parts of the story. It’s always a balancing act: tell more story at the risk of boring people to death at the pace.
